I thought about doing a similar rework after changing an octopus about 4 years ago. Unfortunately the water pump decided to expire and I got rid of the car -in a fit of peke - 1.7 DT. But I am back in the fold with a 1.9D now. I have yet to explore underneath in detail - waiting until I am back from an extended holiday.
At the time I posted a detailed "The Octopus - Do not be afraid" under a previous user id - but I have failed to find it with a Forum search.
Have you decided on the most suitable type of flexible pipe for LHM? I guess that probably tight radius bends are going to be the most difficult to prevent kinking. Probably the best way is to use copper pipe for the bends with suitable joiners. eg the FHC .
Are you going to adopt the existing layout with the 'coming together' under the car. I just wonder if it would be better to keep the 'manifold' somewhere on the bulkhead in the engine compartment and just extend all the existing pipes
When you have finished it would be good to see a parts list with suitable suppliers listed. A group buy of pipe would probably be cost effective as 100m prices are probably much cheaper.
A chart of pipe internal and external sizes by function would probably also be useful, to identify the best way of joining new to existing pipe work. I have often wondered why Cit did not standardise on just one size of pipe - is there a good reason?
Useful site that I had not sen before
http://tedperkins.com/high_volume_return_lines.htm
Useful reference site (probably you have been there, but useful for newbies)
http://www.mars.dti.ne.jp/~ynar/bxorg_a ... /m15e.html